Hi Odin, remember we want to make quality blog posts. This means you need to include labels and a statement about your learning. You also need to make sure you have a buddy check your writing before you publish. This piece of writing is persuading someone to have longer lunch times at school and you had some good ideas about what you would do if lunch time was longer, but you should try and think of a couple more points because you want someone to agree with your point of view.
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Hi Odin, remember we want to make quality blog posts. This means you need to include labels and a statement about your learning. You also need to make sure you have a buddy check your writing before you publish. This piece of writing is persuading someone to have longer lunch times at school and you had some good ideas about what you would do if lunch time was longer, but you should try and think of a couple more points because you want someone to agree with your point of view.
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